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Originally Posted by browneyes106  I didn't know about the other woman until last night. I haven't seen my brother's fiance in two weeks she lives a few hours away and only comes around on the weekends. |
You didn't know about the other woman until last night, and yet you earlier typed you are close to your brother.
Keep typing chapter by chapter. Have you tried to sell book or movie rights yet? Because this is the kind of stuff fiction is all about.
A nice bit of entertainment for mc for a while is what we have here.
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