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Old 10-02-2007, 02:43 PM
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I am not smarter than a third grader - need punctuation help

Which of the following has the correct punctuation? And for those of you running to spellcheck, I've already done that. It accepts both.

On May 1, 1999, Joe Smith was born at University Hospital.

On May 1, 1999 Joe Smith was born at University Hospital.
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Old 10-02-2007, 02:48 PM
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My 7th & 10th grader say the bottom one.
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Old 10-02-2007, 03:02 PM
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I am thinking the top one. It reads smoother. :O)
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Old 10-02-2007, 03:03 PM
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I say the bottom one too.

Here is a site that might help
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Old 10-02-2007, 03:04 PM
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I think it's the bottom one.
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Old 10-02-2007, 03:05 PM
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I say the top one and here is why. Normally after a date, you would put a comma which would indicate it to be a brief pause. If you went with the second one, it would be read as "On May 1......1999 Joe Smith was born" but the first one would read as "On May 1, 1999....Joe Smith was born". Does that make sense?
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I vote for the bottom one
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Old 10-02-2007, 03:07 PM
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I say bottom one
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Old 10-02-2007, 03:11 PM
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I say top 1. Seems smoother as stated.

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Old 10-02-2007, 03:17 PM
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I say the top one and here is why. Normally after a date, you would put a comma which would indicate it to be a brief pause. If you went with the second one, it would be read as "On May 1......1999 Joe Smith was born" but the first one would read as "On May 1, 1999....Joe Smith was born". Does that make sense?

Exactly why I say the top one. I just checked with a first grade teacher and she says the top one, but even she isn't sure. Isn't anybody out there an English teacher?
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Old 10-02-2007, 03:33 PM
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I'm not sure, so I would just rewrite the entire sentence like this:


Joe Smith was born at University Hospital on May 1, 1999.
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Old 10-02-2007, 03:40 PM
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ok after reading the site I posted for you it is the first one. See number 10 at the comma site and the examples in the box below it.
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Old 10-02-2007, 03:52 PM
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It is definitely the first one. My 5th graders just had this type of sentence on their DOL.
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Old 10-02-2007, 04:08 PM
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Which of the following has the correct punctuation? And for those of you running to spellcheck, I've already done that. It accepts both.

On May 1, 1999, Joe Smith was born at University Hospital.

On May 1, 1999 Joe Smith was born at University Hospital.
I have been a teacher for 25 years mostly in 4th and 5th grades. I only taught English twice (science is my thing). The first one is correct because a comma is used to separate the date from the year. The comma after the date is there because a comma is used to separate a prepositional phrase (On May 1, 1990,). The word on is a preposition.
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Old 10-02-2007, 04:29 PM
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I have been a teacher for 25 years mostly in 4th and 5th grades. I only taught English twice (science is my thing). The first one is correct because a comma is used to separate the date from the year. The comma after the date is there because a comma is used to separate a prepositional phrase (On May 1, 1990,). The word on is a preposition.
I am a college ESL teacher, and the first sentence is correct for the reason given above. When a prepositional phrase comes at the beginning of a sentence, you need a comma. When it comes at the end (I was born on May 1, 1990.) you don't.
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Old 10-02-2007, 05:12 PM
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I also say the top - I was always taught that when a date is in a sentence, there is a comma after it.

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Old 10-02-2007, 08:11 PM
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I'm a former court reporter and had to type dates all the time in my transcripts. The first one is correct.
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Old 10-02-2007, 08:44 PM
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I like the top one better, because it just sounds more clear.
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Old 10-02-2007, 11:30 PM
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I had the BEST sixth grade English teacher--in 1965--she would have said the top one is correct!
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Old 10-03-2007, 08:12 AM
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Got the official nod from a h.s. English teacher this morning. We have a winner with number one.

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